The Burnt World of Athas:
about 1 month ago,
Valsavis
said:
Great Domain, but True Seeing and Find the Path don´t seem to belong to it. Maybe Blindness or Scorching Ray (firing from the eyes, of course). Thank you
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Actually, I thought the spells were quite appropriate. It's more a domain focused on true, unobstructed sight. If anything, continual flame and fire track were inappropriate (but only marginally so). I'd just change the name, not the spells.
As for balance, the granted power seems too weak to be effective. Seeing how most of the spells are not terribly strong, perhaps the granted power should have more punch to even out the domain. Maybe replace it with an ability to negate illusions with a spot or level check or something?